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  • Stephen Dean 5:21 pm on February 8, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Recommended Products 

    Notice anything different? There are at least two changes, one obvious and one not as much.

    Long time readers will notice this blog theme has changed quite a bit. The most obvious being the new Wordpress theme, called P2.

    Another thing I’ve recently added is the “Recommended Products” pull-down menu at the top of the page with links to products I find worthy of promoting.

    Place your mouse over the words “Recommended Products” and you’ll see 4 products I’ve personally checked out and love. They’re also here…

    All 4 of them are worth at least double the asking price, so I decided to see if I could highlight them here.

    Each product owner gave me permission to do so, and even decided to give me a commission for any sales I send their way. Cool!

    If you purchase one and are not happy with it, you probably shouldn’t trust my opinion again. It’s with that understanding that I highly recommend these products.

     

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  • Stephen Dean 7:10 pm on February 5, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Building A Copywriting Swipe File 

    Many copywriters advise that you keep a swipe file. Meaning that you keep a collection of high quality advertisements to study and get ideas from when writing your own copy.

    There are ways to collect an awesome set of offline advertisments… and one way is to BUY products from successful offline mailers. But frankly I’ve never gone this route.

    I primarily write copy online and I look for online copy to put in my swipe file.

    In the past when I found copy I liked I’d bookmark it or add it to my favorites. This worked OK… until the site disappeared, the offer was taken down or the copy changed.

    Then I tried saving the webpage with the copy to my computer. This works OK still. But it can be messy with all the extra files attached to the webpage. Especially if all I want to keep is a headline.

    So now I’ve discovered my favorite method for keeping a collection of swiped ads.

    Windows Vista, Windows 7 and some versions of Windows XP have a “Snipping Tool” that allows you to highlight a portion of your screen and save it as an image.

    Now it’s easy and painless to save a simple headline. Take for example this quick swipe of the headline from my Copywriting Services page. (Which of course was based on a swiped headline :)

    I’ve set up a folder on my PC’s “Desktop” called appropriately, “Swipe File.” And another folder inside there is named “Headlines.” I save all swiped headlines in here.

    Then when it’s time to look at successful headlines, I can open up any image inside this folder. Windows opens the image inside of it’s photo viewer and allows me to hit “Next” over and over again browsing my swiped headlines.

    Fantastic! So much cleaner than paper or saved web pages.

    Of course, most of the images you are creating involve copyrighted material. So you shouldn’t be sharing or selling your swipe file with anyone.

    But creating a swipe file this way for your personal use is no problem. (At least that’s what I believe. I’m no lawyer, so do your own research.)

    In any case, you have permission to swipe any of my sales copy for your personal use in this way.

    And if you’re looking for more copy to swipe, you might start here:

    Productivity Engineering

    Good luck hunting and swiping!

     
    • Kristi Daniels (2 comments.) 2:39 pm on February 6, 2010 Permalink

      Thank you for another great post.

      Bookmarking is a great idea. And if the page disappears or the ad copy changes, then they probably weren’t that profitable for the original seller.

      Maybe your original method of bookmarking the pages would produce the highest quality swipe file.

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 6:50 pm on February 6, 2010 Permalink

      Yes, you’re right :)

      For people who don’t know, and correct me if I’m wrong, the Copy Oracle software looks for paid ad copy that stays unchanged for long periods of time… in the assumption that it’s profitable.

      The theory being if that copy doesn’t change over a long period of time and the someone keeps paying to promote the advertisement, it’s more likely to be profitable.

      I like collecting screenshots because it’s easier to breeze through dozens of headlines quickly to get ideas. And I count on the Copy Oracle software to help verify the quality of the headlines I write based on my swipe file.

      Hopefully that’s a good system.

    • Fox (1 comments.) 6:11 am on February 8, 2010 Permalink

      There is also a plugin for Firefox called grab it (if I remember correctly, I’m reading this on my phone) that turns an entire web page into a jpg image. You can save the entire page instead of just snips, if you want.

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 5:01 pm on February 8, 2010 Permalink

      Awesome Fox, thanks for the heads up.

    • Ryan Healy (10 comments.) 5:53 pm on February 8, 2010 Permalink

      I like to use SnagIt. I can capture any region of a web page… or capture an entire sales letter. It’s one of my favorite tools.

      I also learned of a new site called PDFmyURL.com. This is a free tool that lets you PDF any web page. Works like a charm — except it will leave blank spaces in the PDF where any videos are in the sales letter. But that’s not a big deal.

      Ryan

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 6:02 pm on February 8, 2010 Permalink

      PDFmyURL.com – Awesome! Thanks for the resource, Ryan. I’ve been pondering how to do this lately, as I like to send my clients updates in PDF form instead of HTML so they don’t have the temptation to start making changes before I’m finished.

      Cheers!

  • Stephen Dean 3:38 am on February 5, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Ed Charkow Testimonial 

    Ed Charkow filled out an application to write sales copy for a $197 product. I liked the service they were offering and took them up on the offer.

    After the project Ed left me this testimonial:

    “…9 Hours To Pay Off The Sales Letter…”

    “Stephen did such a rotten job for us it took all of 9 hours to pay off the sales letter with PPC ads only. I don’t recommend him unless you want a good sales letter at a decent price.

    “Sorry for the bad review Stephen I just felt folks should be warned that your copy did a great job for us

    “(For those of you don’t get sarcasm – Stephen is a good guy who will take care of you and do a great job.)”

    Ed Charkow

    You can hire me to write your sales copy at Copy Productions.

     
  • Stephen Dean 2:19 pm on February 4, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    A VERY Telling Conversion Story On Twitter 

    Some traffic sources convert better than others. You might get a 10% conversion rate from JV partner traffic and 1% from banner ad traffic. That’s normal, but…

    …Recently I made an interesting discovery about two wildly different conversion rates from the SAME source, Twitter.

    I’ve been experimenting with a Twitter traffic system with some success. I’ve been able to get hundreds of clicks in a day without too much effort.

    I’m excited about that. But it’s also important to monitor the conversion rates of that traffic.

    Right now there are two ways I get traffic from Twitter: 1) links within tweets themselves and 2) a link in the bio of my profile.

    Both links go to the same squeeze page, but the two links have wildly different conversion rates.

    When people click on the link in my bio, the conversion rate is DOUBLE that of clicks from promotional tweets.

    Why? I’m always careful when making assumptions. But I can offer a guess.

    My guess is similar to a post I just read on the Internet Business Box blog titled “Sales Letters vs. Blogs.”

    Their theory is that people resist being sold to. Copywriters are taught this as well.

    The author believes that when people are allowed to click around and control the shopping experience, they are more likely to buy. It’s an interesting experiment and I look forward to seeing how it works out.

    So what’s the difference between the two conversions coming from Twitter?

    Links that appear in Tweets come off as advertisements that the reader responds too. They’re being sold to and they know it.

    But when a visitor clicks a link in the bio, they may feel like THEY’RE initiating the shopping experience. They may feel more in control and feel less resistance to the offer.

    It’s just a guess, but I think a good one.

    What do you think, is there a better explanation for the difference in conversion rates from nearly the same source?

    Leave a comment if you have a theory.

     
    • Ryan Healy (10 comments.) 4:15 pm on February 4, 2010 Permalink

      Here’s a theory that adds to your theory.

      When people are looking at your profile page, they are actually investigating you. They want to know if you’re someone who deserves to be followed.

      A tweet is different. Even though a person may be “following” you, every tweet you send is an interruption. So most followers are probably not actively looking for your tweets.

      This may be why the conversion rate is better from profile pages: The person is seeking you out instead of you seeking your followers out.

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 7:36 pm on February 4, 2010 Permalink

      Hey Ryan, thanks for expanding. I think that’s exactly right.

      Hmm… do you think a person has less sales resistance if they approach a salesman rather than being approached?

      Or do you think an increase in sales may be entirely explained by the fact that the person was obviously interested when approaching?

    • Kristi Daniels (2 comments.) 10:20 pm on February 4, 2010 Permalink

      I’m sorry if I am distracted away from the discussion at hand. I just realized that I don’t think I even have a link in my bio!

      Yikes!

      Thanks Stephen for the link!

    • Rhen 11:23 am on February 5, 2010 Permalink

      Interesting. I love these counter-intuitive results.

      I’ve had similar experiences. People like to buy but don’t like to be sold to.I think it’s a mixture of both not being sold to + the prospect prequalifying himself already by looking at your bio.

      But it is not a big qualifier. I personally like to also click on people’s bios when I don’t know them and follow the links, just because I’m curious as to who they are. It really all depends on what’s in your bio+how trustable you look once they land on your blog/site/whatever.

      My theory is that the profile bio establishes credibility and trust. By the time they read your pitch, theyre already warmed up to it. (They convinced themselves by making judgements about you already because you seem legit and solid).

      My 2 cents

  • Stephen Dean 4:37 pm on February 3, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Rhen Khong Testimonial 

    Veteran affiliate Rhen Khong filled out an application at CopyProductions.com. I accepted his application and wrote a sales piece for an affiliate product he was promoting.

    More than a year later he left me this testimonial.

    Stephen Beat A Marketing Team Of Over 15 People

    “Stephen wrote a piece for me last year that was directly responsible for $37,410.00 worth of affiliate commissions so far.

    “His copy was so good that I started noticing my merchant (who have a direct response marketing team of over 15 people) literally copied my landing page’s headline and changed all their Google ads!”

    Rhen Khong
    Veteran Affiliate Marketer

    You can hire me to write your sales copy at CopyProductions.com.

     
  • Stephen Dean 7:36 pm on February 2, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Clixsense – Penny Traffic That Converts 

    Recently I discovered a traffic source that can send thousands of visitors to your site for a penny each.

    It’s from a site called ClixSense. And that’s an affiliate link, because I highly recommend this service.

    Penny traffic is known for being POOR QUALITY and can kill a conversion rate. But because it’s so cheap it can still be profitable.

    For $12 (which included a $2 processing fee) I sent around 1000 visitors to a squeeze page. The squeeze page wasn’t too polished, although it did contain 6 of the 7 traits of a successful squeeze.

    Even with a mediocre squeeze page I got 28 opt-ins. That’s 43 cents per targeted lead.

    If you have a $100 product that converts at 1%, then each visitor is worth $1. If it only costs you 43 cents to get a visitor, then you’re profiting 57 cents per visitor.

    If I add the 7th element of a successful squeeze page and polish it up a bit, I believe I could easily double the squeeze page’s conversion rate. That’d bring the cost per targeted lead to 20-some cents. Very nice!

    I highly recommend giving ClixSense at least one shot. I ran my ad 3 times and noticed the subsequent visitor-buys got me repeat visitors that didn’t convert. In future tests I’ll be looking for a way to avoid this repeat traffic and I’ll share my results.

    And a hint on setting up your campaign.

    ClixSense allows you to narrow down the traffic you’ll receive in to a smaller demographic.

    If your market’s customer base is heavily female or male, then make sure your ad only is displayed to that gender.

    You can choose to only display your ad to premium members, meaning people who have paid money, and that’s a very good idea.

    And you can also restrict the ad to English speaking countries, which can help for obvious reasons.

    Give it a try and let me know how it works for you.

     
    • Kristi Daniels (2 comments.) 12:44 pm on February 3, 2010 Permalink

      Cool!

      I had similar results and highly recommend this particular penny traffic source.

      Here’s the URL to my writeup:

      http://copyoracle.com/blog/clixsensefinalresults

      I didn’t get as many opt-ins because I’m not a master copywriter like you, but I did get a sale that made it very worthwhile.

  • Stephen Dean 7:43 pm on February 1, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    7 Steps To A Successful Squeeze Page 

    If you’re going to sell a product online, it’s often smart to get your visitor’s email address before sending them to the sales letter.

    This gives you the benefit of emailing the visitor in the future with links to the sales letter, alternate sales letters, and maybe to someone else’s sales page through an affiliate link.

    It also means more people will drop off at the squeeze page and never see the sales letter. So at times it can be more important to maximize the conversion of the squeeze page than the actual sales copy!

    I’ve had squeeze pages convert at over 50% of visitors to relatively targeted visitors. (The same squeeze page will convert at around 2-5% with untargeted traffic.)

    These are the 7 elements I use to get these high conversion rates.

    1. Give A “Reason Why” They Should Give Their Email Address

    Take a step back and look at your business from an outsider’s perspective. No one wants to give you their email address just because you exist.

    There must be a reason why.

    Most people use a freebie as their reason why. I’ve given away ebooks, videos and software free with great success.

    But some freebies are better than others! Ryan Deiss stresses testing your freebie to see which leads to the most new customers. (And that’s CUSTOMERS, not simply subscribers.)

    I suspect I’m giving away an ebook right now that’s hurting sales. Either because it’s too long, takes away from the sales process or some other reason. So I’ll be testing it against another squeeze page offer.

    And that offer may not be a freebie at all!

    One of my favorite squeeze pages converted at more than 50% and didn’t give anything away. It simply built curiousity and suspense in a few sentences, then asked for your name and email to discover the resolution.

    PERFECT!

    Curiousity is a GREAT tool for squeeze pages.

    I’ll analyze this type of squeeze page on the blog in the future.

    2. A Great Headline

    I don’t use much copy on the squeeze page at all. For me, the headline carries the weight. I’ve added more copy only to see my testing software determine it wasn’t helping sales.

    A great headline will satisfy Michael Masterson’s 4 U’s. That means writing something that’s…

    Urgent
    Ultra-Specific
    Unique
    Useful

    Add a strong dose of curiousity to the 4 U’s and you’ll have a strong headline to take center stage.

    3. Get An Animated Video That Starts Automatically

    An animated “talking head” video (see http://www.sitepal.com/) that starts automatically can do amazing things for your conversion rate.

    ESPECIALLY for low-quality traffic. I’ve seen conversion rates jump from barely recordable to 2-5% just by adding an animated “talking head” video.

    Ryan Deiss found an “animated” video actually outperformed live-action videos!

    SitePal is fairly easy to set up, so I highly recommed giving it a try. (They have a free trial.)

    4. Keep Your Opt-In Form Above The Fold

    In the past I’ve noticed that adding several blank lines before your headline can increase conversion. But I’ve noticed the exact opposite for squeeze pages.

    I’m assuming the reason for that is it can push your opt-in form down the page so the visitor can’t see it without scrolling. That’s called “below the fold.”

    From memory, all of my highest converting squeeze pages had the opt-in form “above the fold” so the visitor didn’t have to scroll.

    5. Put A Box Around The Opt-In Form

    A great way to draw attention to your opt-in form is to put it inside of a colored table. The code below won against no table at all. Just insert your opt-in form code between the two lines.


    6. Use Arrows To Draw Attention To Your Opt-In Form.

    Another way to draw attention to your opt-in form that has won in tests is to point at the opt-in form with red arrows.

    You can usually find graphics like these at stock photography websites.

    7. Ask For An Email Address Only

    Yup, simply asking for an email address beats asking for name and email. My test results show this, and so do to tests by numerous other marketers.

    And that’s that, 7 steps to a successful squeeze page.

    From there, of course, you need a successful sales letter and email follow-up campaign.

    If you’d like a stellar squeeze page, sales letter and email sequence you can fill out an application here.

     
    • Jim Sansi (4 comments.) 12:32 pm on February 5, 2010 Permalink

      Email address only landing pages are something I notice Agora does, clearly it works well for them. The freebie is also a one page special report.

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 3:28 pm on February 5, 2010 Permalink

      Thanks Jim. Do you know how they deliver the report? Is it sent as an attachment? Or is it just another web page after the opt-in?

      The latter sounds best to me…

    • Jim Sansi (4 comments.) 6:42 pm on February 5, 2010 Permalink

      From what I have seen they email you a link to the special report which is back on the main site… For example checkout dailywealth.com

  • Stephen Dean 1:06 pm on January 30, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    If It’s A Weekend, 24% Chance You’ll Find Me Here… 

    It’s Saturday, which means it’s time to wind down and enjoy life.

    I live in the Pacific Northwest. There’s a place not too far from here that makes it really easy to enjoy life. And it’s REALLY easy with the right company.

    It’s the Columbia Gorge. Thomas Jefferson sent Lewis & Clark to go find it… in a round-about, not-really kind of way. But Lewis & Clark did travel the length of the gorge on their journey.

    It’s an amazing site to see, check it out if you ever get a chance.

    What do YOU like to do on the weekend to wind down? Hit “Reply” to leave a comment.

     
    • William Byrne (1 comments.) 4:27 pm on January 30, 2010 Permalink

      The repky button at the bottom is a little confusing, as when you clikit it says all your post will be lost, so i will try it again.

      Many yeas ago I drove to Calgary and followed the Colombia river from the mouth all the way up and then to Seattle, Sandpoint along the Kootenay and then to Calgary.. The Colombia is one mighty river and the Coastguard train their Boatsmen and women at the mouth of the Colombia and that’s mighty rough water.

      I spend the Summers in Shedia/Moncton New Brunswick, Canada which has some of the highest tides in the world.

      I go ocean Swimming with my old buddies. I wear a shorty wetsuit and they call me the Califronia
      Chicken. The water is 63 to 68 degrees in the summer and it’s a little refreshing.

      I live in Silicon Valley and my tolernce for cold has dimished greatly.
      Like you I love the outdoors.
      We get to Oregon alot as my daughter lives in Ashland.
      Ivars in Seattle is a greta place to eat.

      Bill Byrne

    • Stephen Dean (6 comments.) 4:25 pm on February 1, 2010 Permalink

      Thanks Bill, which Ivars do you mean? Or is it a chain?

      http://www.yelp.com/search?find_desc=ivars&ns=1&find_loc=seattle

      I love trying new restaurants. Most of my family lives in Washington but the few who don’t live in SoCal, so I got to switch climates quite a bit over the summers growing up. I like it hot, but I also love having all 4 seasons here. It’s beautiful country.

      Cheers! And thanks for the feedback on comments, I’m going to try and fix some things.

  • Stephen Dean 3:23 pm on January 29, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Should You Use A Squeeze Page? 

    There’s an inevitable question most business owners face when setting up a new product site…

    Should you make the main page a squeeze page or send them directly to the sales letter.

    A squeeze page captures the visitor’s email so you can send follow up emails to try and make the sale more than once. With a sales page only, you often get just one chance.

    So arguments can be made for both sides, but there’s an easy way to test how it will effect initial sales. Set up a split test.

    Instead of making the squeeze page or the sales page the root index page (i.e. the home page of your domain), set up a split test with either Easy Split Test, Muvar, or Google Analytics.

    Version A of your test can redirect the visitor to the squeeze page.

    For the testing programs above, you’ll need to use the Meta Refresh redirect. Just change the URL below to your squeeze page’s URL and then insert this code in to the HEAD section of your HTML page.

    Version B will redirect to the sales page using similar Meta Refresh code.

    The “Thank You” page code goes on the product thank you page just like normal. And as the sales come in you’ll get to see if your squeeze page and follow up emails are helping or hurting sales.

    This will give you a basic answer to the question of having a squeeze page.

    Of course, after the squeeze page you need an amazing sales page to close the deal.

    But there is one flaw to the above test. Can you spot it? If you have a guess or know the answer, leave it as a comment!

     
    • Simon Crabb (1 comments.) 4:54 am on February 2, 2010 Permalink

      But, remember, if you have no squeeze page, your immediate sales may increase, but your list of leads doesn’t grow. I’m not sure a split test based on sales is the best way of deciding if you need a squeeze page or not?

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 12:57 pm on February 2, 2010 Permalink

      Exactly. If you don’t have any back end products and don’t plan any affiliate promotions, then the above test will work accurately.

      But LEADS have value as well that won’t factor in if you don’t change the way you record sales for this test.

      Software like Muvar tracks “Visitor Value” and not sales. And allows you to modify the value of a sale depending on how they got to the sales page.

      That modification will take a blog post to go over. I’ll write it down to make sure I come back to it. :)

  • Stephen Dean 1:21 pm on January 28, 2010 Permalink | Reply  

    Get 139 Links To Your Site Overnight 

    Want 139 new links pointing to your site, for free?

    Then link to my blog from your blog’s sidebar or blog roll. Between my WP control panel and stats programs I’ll be sure to see the link, and I’ll reciprocate by putting you in my blog’s sidebar.

    This site has 139 pages listed in Google, and that number is going up. If I put you in my sidebar, Google will soon see 139 links to your site.

    Sounds like a good deal to me. If you like the content on this blog, or just like me, add me to your sidebar immediately before you forget!

    Another way to get links…

    Comment! I’ve changed my blog theme so that comments are now displayed on the front page. That means anyone who comes to my blog can see a link to your site from the front page!

    Note: My blog doesn’t use “do-follow” until you’ve left 5 comments, so you may not get the link love from the search engines until you become a regular.

     
    • Kristi Daniels (2 comments.) 5:07 pm on January 28, 2010 Permalink

      Awesome!

      Oh wait… I’m already linking to you in my blog roll… and you were already linking to me.

      Still awesome!

    • Alan Jenks (1 comments.) 1:06 am on January 29, 2010 Permalink

      Just added you to the blogroll.

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 12:35 pm on January 29, 2010 Permalink

      Thanks Kristi! And I got you in the sidebar now too, Alan. THANK YOU.

    • Paul Aaron Travis (1 comments.) 12:15 pm on February 2, 2010 Permalink

      Alrighty, I’m on board. But you’ll notice I linked to you from my strategic marketing blog. Instead, I’d prefer your link go to my Networking Experience & Enjoyment survey. (Numerous people have told me this short questionnaire ALONE has helped them think about networking differently!)

    • Stephen Dean (26 comments.) 8:19 pm on February 2, 2010 Permalink

      Thanks Paul, done.

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