Comments on: Free Sales Letter Critique

By: Stephen Dean

Stephen Dean — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 19:22:16 +0000

Thanks Bill and Glenn, that’ll work. I wish I had time to do both. I’ll be choosing one and recording the critique over the next week or so.

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By: Glenn Livingston - Pay Per Click Search Marketing

Glenn Livingston - Pay Per Click Search Marketing — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 10:11:26 +0000

Hi Stephen… it’s Glenn Livingston

I’m really ramping up the pressure on:
http://www.HyperResponsiveMarketingSecrets.com

If you don’t mind something in the IM space, I’m always interested in critiques.

By: Bill Byrne

Bill Byrne — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 01:07:12 +0000

Stephen,
I used in part your 90 min sales letter which I found useful.
The result of this is shown on my website http://circle-of-fifths.com/.
In particular the product page descibed as Music Education bundle.

I would be interested in a crritique and my plan is to replace all the other pages with this longer sales letter.

Bill Bynre